[It seems to be working; at the very least, the shadowy figure
flickers around the edges a little, as though losing some of its substance.
There's still a strong hint of human reasoning in here, human reasoning
that's horrified by his actions as this shadowy monster.]
A shitty monster.
[That's the kind of monster, apparently, that doesn't like killing
people.]
Re: video;
[It seems to be working; at the very least, the shadowy figure flickers around the edges a little, as though losing some of its substance. There's still a strong hint of human reasoning in here, human reasoning that's horrified by his actions as this shadowy monster.]
A shitty monster.
[That's the kind of monster, apparently, that doesn't like killing people.]